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I liked the concept, and have two major suggestions.
1) Get rid of the PC speakers at the end. It doesn't make sense to me, and just distracts from the beautiful mac stuff on the floor.
2) Use Apple's font for the text. I'd suggest using Adobe's Myriad Pro Semibold, which is what apple uses on most of its packaging. Apple also occasionally uses Helvetica Neue.
Overall, good job. It just needs a little cleanup to give it that Apple-like finish.
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