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I like what you've got there, especially the zoom-in at the end on the Apple logo. However, I'm not a fan of the text you've got going on. I see what you're trying to show: this stuff is Apple, this stuff is not. But I think anyone can see that, as the only non-apple product is those speakers. If you want to show the difference, I suggest getting the speakers over there and then removing them, as they don't fit in with the other stuff. That would probably bring your point across even more!
Also, I think that you should just leave the Apple logo at the end, without the "Apple" underneath it.
These are my suggestions! You're doing great work with stop motion LegoShark - be sure to show us more of your work!
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